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I wasn’t sure what to expect, but I thought the ending was perfect!

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The surprises and twists 50-word "shorties" can give us is so much fun. I'm very happy you enjoyed this one and its ending, Justin, thank you!

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I love the title! And the ending was definitely a surprise. Enjoyed this one, Jenise!

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Thank you, Claire! It's fun even for me when a 50-word "shortie" comes together with a twist at the end, despite me, the author, LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

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It was a perfect ending!

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Wow, thank you, Kim! Much appreciated.

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Judging by the image, I would say she is not a fan of surprises. 😉 But hopefully, she broke into a smile moments later.

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Yes, spot on, Mark. She's a bit of an introvert. She did appreciate the sentiment behind the surprise party, though.

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