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Beautiful, Jenise! It reminds me of my teenage years. We used to go swimming in a river that rain beneath old railroad tracks. We put a pool in last spring, so now most of our hot summer days are spent in it!

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Justin, what a wonderful memory, thank you for sharing it with us! How fun to float down the river, and look up at the old railroad bridge. Maybe there's a new story in that memory for you to write?

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I love this poem! The imagery is so striking!

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Jason, thank you for your kind words. I'm pleased this verse touched you! 😃

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