Sounds of Love and Light
Haiku verse
Followed by cold rain
mountain mists dissolve into
sounds of love and light
About this Verse
The Haiku Challenge thread inspired my verse. I used the last line in another poet's haiku as the first line in my verse.
To learn more about the Haiku Challenge, read: Sunset Caresses on my website.
There are rules for writing haiku verse, and then there are those who seek a more open composition, more freedom. Both approaches encourage poets to consider our five senses, and then get creative with the human sensory experience.
In that spirit, my last line reads: "sounds of love and light".
Hmm.
Well, no need to try and figure out the last line as there isn't some mystical meaning. However, I did create a challenge for the next person in the haiku thread.
<Evil laugh, LOL!>
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Your Turn
What are your thoughts about experimenting with describing the five senses in new or creative ways? Please leave a Comment, as I’d love to hear from you.
Such a beautiful poem! I loved this
Loved this, Jenise!